Then, you get older, and somehow the sadness refuses to leave, and someone says to you, “Sometimes we just need hope. Write about that.”
There are true struggles instead of imagined ones. And they are not so black and white. The world is not constructed of the “good guy” and “the bad guy” and instead it is the homophobic parents whom you actually adore and cannot give up; the unrequited love of a girl with curly hair or a boy who is now living in Sierra Leone but is still dating his long-distance girlfriend in Boston. I think her name is Heather. And the boy has probably contracted Ebola at this point, and the girl wants to marry her girlfriend, and suddenly, you can no longer rely on the pretty and tragic tropes of your youth to make your writing mean something.
No. Now you must understand and figure out a way to live alongside villains, and maybe go to their birthday parties. Now you must figure out how to relate all of your sad poetry about bones and dust to living and breathing creatures who do not have the option to live or perish, but sometimes are just trying to be in between, because the reality is, it is this in between where we all have to reside.
Maybe you had to teach yourself how not to fall apart because it is now not the grandiose that makes or breaks you—it is not a tragic death or an overwhelming romance. It is the semantics, the nuances, the realities of what it is to be human in this world and that, sometimes it is embracing the droll and that sometimes it is making the tragedies known and acknowledged without adding stevia or honey or whatever it is these days that we are supposed to use to sweeten up the bitter.
Life is comprised of individual tragedies. They may not seem like tragedies originally to the naked eye. They may not seem overtly life-shattering. But you and I both know that the pang you have when you look at your daughter and you know that she will someday not be that pudgy 5 year old with the weird affection for vanilla yogurt devastates you. The things we push to the side—the aging, the nursing homes, the fear of not being able to contribute or lose your “gift” whatever it may be. So now—the tragedies are not as “other” as the burning house or the girl that dies when she is 16 of leukemia. They are not things to sob and cry about in the comfort of your bed before you shut the book and log on to your Facebook page or Post Secret or Reddit, or watch the 10’o’clock news.
Somehow, the work and writing that has to be written has at once become more mundane and more confronting. It is the art of controlling the kind of seeping emotion you want your reader to feel. Your writing and style and understanding of what true romance and tragedy and irony are have aged like a wine or a whisky in the cellar of your experience, and something much more frightening and subtle has emerged.
Your grandmother is 84. She has blue eyes and white hair. Her fear is not death. Her fear is irrelevance and lack of function. “Katie. I don’t like being here… everyone just seems so… old. And I am not…. at least I don’t think I am.” The quiet sobbing that comes at night or in the shower from her is not of a tragic and abrupt end, but a drawn out lack of participation or piece in the world around her. The “lonely shiver” that comes out of no where—and the little voice in your mind that reminds you of the utter largeness of the universe and the utter smallness of you.
This feeling—the one right now, the developing one that your mind tries to shut down—do you feel it? The subtleness of it, the resistance, the gloom that starts in your belly or chest and makes you feel slightly colder.
Or: the much harder and more difficult and complex combination of words that need to come together to incite some other feeling in your reader. Maybe it isn’t survival, any longer. Maybe it is not that the protagonist lives, because as we have just seen: living or dying sometimes is not the climactic end to our writing any more. Maybe it is hope, and what a lofty order.
You know that you have lived, and lived authentically. You have invested in friendships and maybe saved lives in ways you didn’t know were possible.
10 years ago, you were called to jury duty, and the 16-year-old punk kid who was so inebriated that he clipped a cops car—maybe you were the sole hold-out for his not being charged with “assault of an officer” in court.
The mundane becomes something hopeful. To you it was a three-day trial, a nuisance, and you haven’t looked back. However, because of you and the way you decided to stand-up, he was not given 28 years in a federal prison, and instead he became a counselor for troubled kids. He may not thank you or bow to you and you may not feel the intense joy of a romantic ending or the nicely wrapped conclusion of our cancer patient in remission. However, 5 years later, a kid named James comes to you and tells you the boy you stood up for in court became a man who opened up his home to the homeless. He thanks you, clasping your hand and tells you that this thing you did, this mundane and small and not-life-shattering thing has affected his life entirely.
So now the writing has changed because the experience has changed and you now recognize that the bones you wrote about are not dead dusty things, but smaller clusters of living capillaries and veins and have more nuance now. It is these clusters that make up what it is to be a living body, muscles and sinew and names and a more complicated realness and, now knowing the back-story,
When a little boy says, “I love you, you are my best friend” to his grandmother in that short story—is that not more real than a romance?
When she says, “I love you too, James,” and reads him the bedtime story, and her eyes perk up, and she holds him closer, and her cheeks turn rosier and flush with purpose, is that not more, somehow?
